| 2013-06-04 10:25:37 |
4 - Senior Year
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Your a fine writer with a great story line and form. Interesting situation this poor (LOL) lad is in. Keep up the good work and please continue this story. Good Luck !!! |
| 2013-06-06 15:20:12 |
My dad's secret
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Your right. I've noticed some of the discusting comments also, unearned comments that they are. I belive one reason for "Anonymous" showing up so often is because even after you sign in that goes away after you read two or three stories. Keep up the fine work "countrycadillac" |
| 2013-06-07 11:23:36 |
Susie-Lea, Chapt 1
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Very enjoyable chapter. Fine writing and form. Looking forward to next chapter. |
| 2013-06-07 11:52:13 |
Molly - Chapter Six
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Interesting tale. Your writing and form are excellent. Keep up the fine work. I will be waiting for the next chapter. |
| 2013-06-08 10:35:59 |
Susie-Lea, Chapt 2
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As before the writing was perfect and the story flowed perfectly. Can't wait for the next chapter. |