| 2013-05-01 17:31:44 |
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Great story but much too short. I will watch for other stories you may write. Good luck. ALSO in regard to the comment of the doubter of the 4 children. There are men who have had a son or two and then for some reason can't continue to do so that will (and have) encourged thier wife to get pg with another male. |
| 2013-05-01 18:14:34 |
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As always a wonderful story, great writing, wonderful form and a perfect lenght !! I'll be watching for chapter2. Thanks !! (Countrycadillac) |
| 2013-05-03 14:16:48 |
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Never, ever have I read a story that has affected me as this has and chapter 6. This is the best ever, I HOPE YOU HAVE ENOUGH SENSE TO COPYRIGHT IT. Reason; this should be and would be published if presented. Keep up the good work and don't ever stop. (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-05-04 15:16:48 |
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Not the ending I expected but it is the right ending when you think about it. As far as rewriting it I would vote NO as you can never improve perfection. You could continue on after some time with Trish gaining Cindy's powers with another of the wolves and Tim returning (?) to the USA because of medical problems leaving Trish and the wolves with the house and the land. God bless you for this story. (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-05-06 12:39:44 |
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!! A perfectly written story down to every detail . It's always easy to tell when a story is written by a professional writer because it's clear and easy to follow. Here is a case where the father may as well be dead !! Because if he isn't he will wish he was !!!! Great Job !!! (countrycadillac) |