| 2013-05-07 19:08:17 |
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As always a very well written story with great form and a most wonderful kicker at the very end. My heart did a flip flop. MORE !!! |
| 2013-05-15 13:56:32 |
Molly - Chapter Three
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WOW!!!! Great discriptions, fine story line. Good job !! (countrycadillac) |
| 2013-05-18 14:57:46 |
Meeting Amanda: Sarah And Amanda’s Close Call - Chapter 11
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Great story line and form. Continue on with more chapters. |
| 2013-05-18 15:15:40 |
Seduction of Bailey
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Not too bad for a first time try. Don't run evervthing together and slo down your pace a bit. It seems too rushed. Good try !! |
| 2013-05-21 11:00:43 |
Am I Strong Enough to Say No (pt1)
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"O" my' as an OTR driver myself I can see where this could go. It's either "fire & brimstone' or "angel wings" for the next chapters. I bet I can guess where this is going (LOL). Fine writing and story line. Keep up the good work !! (COUNTRYCADILLAC) |