| 2013-04-16 17:34:47 |
my big boy
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WOW !!! Your stories are so hot I almost called the Fire Department too put out my fire. Great writing !! |
| 2013-04-19 11:46:43 |
Knock! Knock! - Its our next door MILF
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If you wish to be a Professional Writer you need to hire a Proof Reader !! Your story has merit and I do wish you well. Please start on Chapter 2 ASAP. Thanks & Good Luck. |
| 2013-04-20 12:54:06 |
It Started At The Pool
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A great five star writing. Please continue with more chapters. One of the finest stories I have ever read. Thank You ! |
| 2013-04-23 10:56:33 |
It Started At The Pool - Part 2
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Another great chapter, I hope, in the end you don't allow Jen's actions to cause a break-up of Greg & Cindy. So far you are headed in the direction of a very easy publication of your story which I'm sure you have already copyrighted. If you haven't already started selling your stories you should look in that direction. Keep up the good work !! |
| 2013-04-24 13:47:03 |
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Well written and very good story line. Keep up the good work, I'll be waiting. |