| 2016-04-24 12:26:25 |
Body of a Man, Mind of Machine - Chapter Two_(1)
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Jeez, that's a little harsh... |
| 2016-04-29 03:06:11 |
Body of a Man, Mind of Machine - Chapter One
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Because she broke through to him. He thought he had sealed everything away completely, but he underestimated the power of an intimate, sexual bond and it brought back some of his humanity. |
| 2016-04-29 13:52:38 |
Body of a Man, Mind of Machine - Chapter Six
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Because even though Logan did it, Adrian still took the law into his own hands, and while anyone can burn down a building, the FBI doesn't want someone capable of killing over thirty men armed with guns while he himself uses only a melee weapon running around the country. |
| 2016-05-02 22:12:56 |
Body of a Man, Mind of Machine - Chapter Six
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Well they don't have sex until days after Jenny wakes up, which means that she would have continued taking birth control. Plus, when it comes to their appearances, people aren't as good at picking out wanted criminals as you think. It's kind of like how no one seeing how much Clark Kent looks like Superman (Henry Cavill, the Man of Steel actor actually confirmed that just wearing glasses is enough, look it up.) Jenny was wearing a hat when they went clothes shopping and Adrian could have altered his appearance when he went out, even if he was just wearing a baseball cap or fake glasses. |
| 2016-12-06 01:02:19 |
Haunted Statue
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A good premise but very poorly written. Stretch it out more, you make it sound like you're retelling it to someone. |