| 2015-08-02 11:46:24 |
Ahriman: The Evolution of a Serial Killer 11
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Would like to see Kaneez involved in the training of the others. The punishments and the girls screaming and her maybe involved in the sacrifice. Other than that great story. |
| 2015-08-06 17:06:54 |
Grandpa'a Milk- Chapter 18
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Your doing to much and not going anywhere |
| 2015-08-13 23:19:08 |
High School: Amy-2
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Haha this is getting so much better great work man |
| 2015-08-06 08:05:55 |
Ahriman: The Evolution of a Serial Killer 12
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Another good chapter. Would like to see Kaneez somehow involved with getting a new girl. Trusting her to go out by herself too. Keep up the good work |
| 2015-08-10 03:01:01 |
Ahriman: The Evolution of a Serial Killer 13
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Not as exciting as the others. Good to see kaneez in the punishments. Keep up the good work. |