| 2015-10-09 00:27:39 |
L&C school of Writing 2 (Debbies new job)
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good followup, love it, keep it going, slow and easy. need to slow it down. |
| 2015-10-09 00:16:04 |
L&C school part 1 A young girls lesson in self discipline
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it did move fast, but I really enjoyed it. and yes, excellent writing potential. |
| 2015-10-08 23:01:49 |
Becoming a Pet: An Innocent Start
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jasmine is Silkstockinglover dumb ass. and I love her stories.. this one is sooo exciting and erotoic, I get wet just reading about this. |
| 2015-10-08 21:52:10 |
First Time In Detention
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it needed to slow down a lot, but still good story line. it needed more suspense, and about 4 more chapters. |
| 2015-10-29 22:01:39 |
Robin The Nanny
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I loved the story line, but it lacked suspense, and needed to be longer, or more chapters to say the least. |