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Comments from Rebelman
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| 2011-06-08 20:44:07 | Msr.Shakespeare, Pushing it? Yes, thank you for the compliment. I am indeed pushing the characters, the plot, my imagination and, it appears, I am pushing your buttons as well. If you can't handle the intensity of the story, please don't read any more because it will only get worse for you. |
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| 2011-06-10 14:46:56 | Thanks for the comments. The entire story was outlined before I started writing and I haven’t deviated from the original plot. Every chapter has a purpose in my stories and helps set up the next part. Sorry if you guys think I have lost my way since I have a very definite story line and I thought it was clear. I can see how only getting one chapter at a time might make it confusing since you can’t just keep reading to see where I am going with it. To make it easier, I will divide the story in half and only post the remaining few chapters of the first part when I am at an appropriate stopping point. Then I will develop the second half as a sequel and post it when I am completely finished. Hopefully, the story will make more sense that way. |
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| 2011-06-30 14:45:21 | Diary of a Slave Merchant - 2008 (Conclusion) | Great story! Hope to see more of your work. |
| 2011-07-03 18:12:19 | Dominating my slutty boss_(0) | Great concept- needs some revamping... -------------------------------------------------------- He always had sick depraved sexual thoughts. He had wanted to dominate some high class stuck up bitch and treat her like the whore she was. It all started with his boss. At 5'7" and 140lbs she was a real beauty. Her milky white skin and long red hair didn't detract from her looks either. She was rich and elegant with a 'better than you' personality that made him want to teach her a lesson. In fact, he hated it that she always made it seem like he wasn't good enough. He wasn't bad looking himself. He was 6' tall, and had a very sexy body. His hair was dark brown and his eyes were a very stunning shade of green. --------------------------------------------------- Watch your point of view and be sure to keep it 1st or 3rd person. Change paragraphs when the focus changes. Just rearrange a few things and you have an awesome story! Keep writing, I look forward to seeing more. |
| 2011-07-12 06:23:14 | This was written over ten years ago and was my first attempt. The site I originally wrote it for was slanted to this theme so it may not be for everyone and I did give fair warning at the beginning... several times. |