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Comments from Ed Itor
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-08-18 23:44:08 | If that was Franco & you continue you could put the very existence of this site in jeopardy. He could bring action against the owners. | |
| 2013-09-19 23:34:06 | My Sexy New Spaceship Chapter 2_(1) | This rec'd a negative vote from me as I agree that what had the possibility of being a good story was ruined by wanting to apparently end it too soon. |
| 2013-10-22 23:27:30 | Ticonderoga – Episode 4 Shattered Dreams | A good ending for this story and as the old Space Operas would show at the end of their story line "And The Adventure Continues..." Thus allowing the fans to continue to return to the story as they wanted. |
| 2013-11-19 23:43:10 | The day I get a step brother. Part 1_(5) | I like to give new writers the benefit of the doubt but unfortunately for you there is no doubt that you not continue to write anything. |
| 2013-11-30 00:26:36 | Can We Survive I | The only thing wrong with this story is The UN involvement as it has no Army. The American Govt. would use their own army thus causing a 2nd Civil War at most. By bringing in The UN (more likely NATO) most if not all citizens would rise up against the foreign invaders, as that is how they would see them, even the U.S. Armed Forces would fight the invaders. The Yankee Govt. would be toppled very quickly because of it. A good premise other wise though. |