| 2017-10-06 08:57:54 |
The Anonymous & The Curious ch2
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Please continue this story |
| 2017-10-10 01:28:21 |
Shaylynn's First Time
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Your lack of punctuation sucks. You keep changing between present and past tenses in the same sentence. Your lack of imagination shows. I couldn’t get past the first paragraph, this was so bad. |
| 2018-02-07 00:01:17 |
Parents Are Gone...
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Please learn how to write. And no part two. It feels like English is not your native language and you’re just learning creative writing. And you need an editor. |
| 2018-02-07 00:01:20 |
Parents Are Gone...
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Please learn how to write. And no part two. It feels like English is not your native language and you’re just learning creative writing. And you need an editor. |
| 2018-02-17 10:44:10 |
The French Lesson
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Best story I’ve read on here in a long time. Even ‘The Creators” isn’t this good. But you do need an editor. Scared means frightened. Not scarred which means a healed over injury. Stared means looked at hard, not starred which means covered with a star. There were a few other minor issues too, but overall, it is a fantastic story. I can’t wait for more! |