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Comments from Blindog55
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-07-09 23:48:11 | Weird changes chap 1 | First I would like to say thank you for your courage to write your own story. You should continue, because as you do your skills as a writer will improve. Writting is an art, nobody paints like Picaso the first time out, and likewise nobody writes like Hemmingway at first crack. It had a few common spelling and grammar errors, but thankfully you didn't run the whole thing together in one huge paragraph. Separating your dialogs between characters is nice. I look forward to reading more. Dog |