| 2014-11-29 16:35:56 |
Retired - Chapter Eleven – Un-Fucking-Believable
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Totally engrossing. Read straight thru. This is what stories should be. You ended it at a perfect point. Any further and it would have became boring. Excellent, really excellent work. |
| 2012-02-11 18:26:23 |
THE GIRLS NEXT DOOR_(1)
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Thanks for the comments. i will try to make Chapter 2 much better. |
| 2012-02-13 20:58:40 |
The Girls Next Door - 2
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You must have read so fast you missed him going to the shower to beat off. It had paragraphs when I hit submit. I don't know what happened. I ran spell check and re-read several times, what did I miss so I can and it to my list for chapter three. |
| 2012-03-13 12:11:11 |
The Girls Next Door ? 7 CJ?s Birthday Surprise
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I'm well into #8-The after Party.. Everyone see's them at the same time. Please post contructive critisism here. Pathetic old perverts pretending to be young males or females need to look in the mirror and get a life |
| 2012-03-14 00:45:32 |
The Girls Next Door ? 7 CJ?s Birthday Surprise
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Amanda and her mom will make their feelings known soon. CJ's sisters are only going to play a very minor role in a future chapter to cement the family. Thanks for your thoughts. |