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Comments from Charmbrights
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-02-27 06:13:10 | The Real Man of the House: Ch. 1 Taking the Mother | Ignore them. The bad grammar fits a 14-year-old narrator perfectly. |
| 2012-03-18 07:42:03 | Executive Decision -- 6 | Mixing present tense and past tense almost randomly is off-putting for the reader. Stick to past tense as this is a story, not a commentary on a football game. |
| 2012-04-03 06:29:33 | Jail Bait | Please check your private messages. |
| 2012-04-05 06:48:06 | Doomsday, the day my life changed! | A very good start to the story, if not in perfect English. See the PM I sent you. |
| 2012-04-10 08:03:57 | Berry Patch Cherry Picker Chapter 6 | As to age limits, they SAY no under 18, but have a look at the stories in the section called "young". It is clear that this limit is not enforced. |