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Comments from AdelioNightstorm
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-05-31 15:06:23 | The Hot Tub Blues | Where's the pregnancy? |
| 2011-07-13 15:55:30 | what ever happenz happens | I cannot fathom this. I can't honestly believe it is conceivable to actually write as shitty as this. Bad English, bad German, bad grammar, bad, bad, bad, BAD! And all that shit about you 'digressing'? Every single word in this piece of garbage is digressing. Seriously, next time you take a break from writing, do us all a favour and stay the heck away from here. You're not even an amateur. You're a fucking amateur wannabe. |
| 2011-08-19 14:19:42 | I found my sister stripping Ch 5 | Write another chapter in which John is persuaded into knocking up Geo! |
| 2011-10-02 10:04:55 | I found my sister stripping Ch 9 | You bastard. You had me hearing the Pokémon theme song throughout the entire stripping part. Apart from that, I look forward to John knocking up Geo. |
| 2011-10-02 10:05:22 | I found my sister stripping Ch 9 | You bastard. You had me hearing the Pokemon theme song throughout the entire stripping part. Apart from that, I look forward to John knocking up Geo. |