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Comments from Dancefire
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2010-09-22 02:35:26 | Needs to be rewritten. | |
| 2010-09-22 02:39:34 | Forbidden Chapter 1 | Good start though a bit rushed and needs more more text to become a story... looking good so far however. |
| 2010-09-22 02:49:10 | Sister Catches Brother | No... just... no... Was utterly blue balling. |
| 2010-09-22 02:53:27 | Sex with my Hot elder sister | Meh story... average but not enough detail. |
| 2010-09-22 11:54:11 | geting in to moms pants | Too quick and too short. Also in incest stories you can't jump so quickly into smut. |