| 2010-09-29 01:22:13 |
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Don't listin to the negativity. I look forward to the next story. I hope Gary is still the main charecter. I will give more feedback when I can on this. |
| 2010-09-29 02:07:57 |
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You already know why I like his story lol. Fantastic story for many reasons. This one is flawless. Very intersting charecters, and unique fantasy. Very inspiring. I hope there is a part two. |
| 2010-10-03 01:45:42 |
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Jesus fucking Christ. Does anyone have an imaganation? Plus I have a few virgins who didn't feel pain during sex, or bleed. Its not that strange of a phenomnon. And I also know virgins who have felt pain, but that doesnt make the latter situation impossible. |
| 2010-10-25 19:08:29 |
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My only beef is I wanted to see Captian Wan Li in action if you know what I mean haha |