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Comments from Oxiel
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-05-23 00:54:31 | Camping Trip [1] | Thanks for the feedback everyone. @PuppetMaster, it wasn't intended as a "couple's retreat, just a friendly trip that sort of led to this. Seemed innocent enough, eh? Also the other couples do end up getting their rocks off. I put it in there, might be a bit subtle. :) @Anonymous there's always more behind the story, and it seemed pretty fast and upbeat but I didn't want to draw it out too much. Given I wrote it more in his perspective, there's blanks that need to be filled in, and it all seems so fast and specific because of his frame of reference. Keep the feedback coming! Even if it's "u fokin suk oxiel eat shit", I'll make sure to ask what kind of feces. smooches |
| 2014-05-23 03:50:02 | Camping Trip [1] | Thank you very much. :) I haven't posted in a long time, and this was somewhat of a warmup, but I did rush it a bit. I completely agree, I failed in the description department. I read it again an hour after it was published and was let down I didn't get very detailed. I'll make it up with the next one. :) |