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Comments from Blue.Jeans
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2009-06-09 16:59:14 | Absolutely amazing. You've done a terrific job. Keep writing | |
| 2009-06-11 08:10:51 | Rockmount Brat Camp | absolutely incredible, thank god for writers like you. this should become a book. i love the metaphors, it really brings the reader into the story. the suspenseful cut off was also a talented move. |
| 2009-06-11 08:24:48 | Jia's Awakening, Ch 1 | very well written, but the beginning was a little out of the blue. you should have made it so that Jeff and Erica had a little more history between them or something. it just would've made the sex more intense. i really do like the descriptive-ness of it though.thanx |
| 2009-06-16 16:37:47 | Megan At Last | nice one ;) |
| 2009-06-17 08:37:48 | The Very First Time | a little cheesy, but not bad. you should try more details, describe the feelings etc. keep working on it ;) |