| 2009-01-19 04:28:45 |
Daddy's girls branch out
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i'm glad you enjoyed it |
| 2009-09-13 04:09:11 |
Ashley & Madison ll
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like the idea of sorority? can't wait be patient |
| 2010-06-06 20:30:09 |
Camryn: C07
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you have a flare to keep the interest for the reader good job. I just hope that you continue down this path. I wish that the parents would get involved with some of your fictio. |
| 2010-11-12 23:41:32 |
Secrets of an Officer\'s Daughter
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please leave some comments as they help!!! if there is something you would like just let me know and I'll do my best to incorporate it intothe story. |
| 2010-12-21 08:53:44 |
How Laura lost her cherry.
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structure!! take your time and develop in your mind what you want to say. Hopefully you take more than 20 minutes to write your next strory. Good storyline but a little more detail would help the reader. |