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Comments from jgepowers
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-07-11 10:49:53 | Missy Brother and Dad (6) | The story's good, but your composition sucks. Hard to read. Break up your paragraphs and separate your diologue. The story will flow much better if you do |
| 2013-10-01 16:09:31 | My Stepdaughter (Part 2) | Can't wait to see what Becca's plan is ... maybe a three way with Mom? |