| 2008-11-26 15:57:28 |
My Girlfriend's Payback
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enjoy the idea of the story, but would improve with a bit more detail. |
| 2011-05-11 05:04:06 |
The Gang (The formation)
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Interesting comments with which i can agree, but I was aiming for realism, I hope you find chapter 2 more to your liking as I will introduce a calming influence of a character. |
| 2011-05-25 20:26:29 |
The rape of my sister-in-law
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Liked the story, a little short. |
| 2011-07-03 12:53:43 |
Writers Block_(1)
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Got to say one of the best stories on here, will have a lot to live upto with your next one. Cannot fault it. |
| 2011-07-03 12:55:47 |
Writers Block 2
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Got to say Rachael you are a natural at this stuff, not read the Principal yet, but will be hard not to judge it against this. |