| 2020-11-17 01:37:04 |
Journey before Destination
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:D More, more, more! :) |
| 2020-12-01 05:45:44 |
Legendary Shy CH5
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I have enjoyed your Legendary Shy series thus far. Some of your simple grammatical quirks are just what I am used to reading from you now, and they don't put me off the game! You are a really good story-teller... I would suggest you find a friend & fellow-writer of Erotica/Porn, and have them beta-read your works before you submit them. A second set of eyes will fix any of that up! Keep writing! |
| 2020-12-20 16:00:15 |
Lily's new cumslut
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It could use a good grammar edit, but wow! What a story! and you laid it all out in such an excellent manner! You are a porn-virtuoso! |
| 2020-12-27 00:47:32 |
Broken Birds, Part 1, Beth's Agony
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OMG! I just read this and I KNOW I will not be missing a single chapter! OMG! You made me cry for Beth... and cheer for the military precision & loyalty you include in this story! So cool! And.. of course she would want her daddy to so gently take her real womanhood! Such a sweet way to fame it! |
| 2020-12-30 20:03:19 |
Broken Birds, Part 5, Runaway Train
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God & Goddess! Every chapter of this story - you impress me with your writing skills more and more! You make every aspect of this story amazing! |