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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-08-03 11:01:38 | A Quiet Friday – His Story (Part 1) | Dear readers - This is the first story I have written and it has several more parts that are yet to be posted. I am polishing the details of those now. I appreciate you positive reaction to what you have read, so far. It's encouraging to know you are enjoying my story. Please vote and please leave comments. Thanks |
| 2020-02-29 13:48:46 | 'Lad & Me in the Barn' | Great story, well written. Thanks |
| 2020-05-17 18:53:34 | A Quiet Friday – His Story (Part 4){revised} | I read and appreciate your comments. So please vote and comment on my stories. Thanks |
| 2021-02-06 14:30:49 | A Quiet Friday -- Her Story (Part 1) {revised} | Dear Trib Fan - be patient. This time line is paralleling "his story". Part 2 will have some action for you. |
| 2021-09-03 14:58:16 | At Your Service | Nice story. But I agree with throatHER. You often confuse the reader with her dialog and his reaction (or vis-a-versa) in the same paragraph. For example, ..."OK, I can wait, but just tell me that there's a chance we might." She looked down shyly. "I'm sorry if you think I'm a tease... would be better written, "OK, I can wait, but just tell me that there's a chance we might." She looked down shyly. "I'm sorry if you think I'm a tease... Please be flattered by this criticism, which is only justified because this is an otherwise excellent story. Keep up the great story telling! |