| 2018-02-13 09:37:02 |
Alice's Descent into Debauchary part 2
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Love this story. A continuation is a must. Despite the minor punctuation errors, it is very well written. The characters are wonderfully portrayed and the content is vividly written. Keep up the good work! I eagerly look forward to not only the next chapters in story but also any other stories that might be lurking in that beautiful mind of yours. It would be an honor to proof read anything for you if that interests you. |
| 2018-06-01 15:55:04 |
Georgia Part 25
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I love this story! I'm curious if chapter 24 exists or is chapter 25 & 26 actually chapters 24 & 25? |
| 2018-06-27 14:01:58 |
Teaching The Girls How To Camp_(1)
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As always I continue to enjoy all of your stories, even the revised and edited ones. Are you even open to communicating with fans of your work? I have posted some questions in a 'inbox' conversation. Is that a good way to communicate with you or is this? |
| 2019-09-13 19:06:27 |
Poor Little Cassie - Chap 11 - The end
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I absolutely loved this entire story. It was very engaging and totally worth investing my time into. The only criticism I have is about the easy way that Tony paid for all of the despicable things that he had done to Cassie, her mother and the others. Rather than a simple death which is far too kind for such a horrendous character, I would have enjoyed hearing that he had his cock surgically cut down to a two inch by one inch pee stick with all of the nerves severed so that he never felt anything again. Then he should be sent on a world tour of every degenerate brothel to have large groups of people abuse his holes. After this he should be taken to a stud farm to be gang raped by every horse and bull in the county over a two or three day period, after this he deserves to be diced into small pieces while still alive to be used as chum for deep sea fishermen. All videos made of Tony should be sold to anyone wishing to buy them with all moneys going to his victims. I'm eager for the next. |