| 2017-08-07 08:03:08 |
Potential Part 20
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Hey, it's me, bistander. For a reason that was not explained to me, I found myself banned from the site at the beginning of the week. I don't think my profile looks like I'm banned if you find me on the forum, but I can't log in. Not sure what that means and I can't ask because I can't log on. Jeez, after 8 years you think they would at least tell me something. If I had to guess, I'd say somebody reported one of my old stories that they failed to remove while I was away from the site years ago. Don't know what this means for posting new chapters here. |
| 2017-08-24 21:04:16 |
Potential Part 19
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Im Bistanders proof reader, chapter 20 was improved with more Rebecca and Deanna, showing the reader both more of Deanna's relationship with Rebecca, the other thing is thing that was missing was when Deanna was planning to loose her virginity and how Rebecca felt about it ect.( which I think is important) I did prefer the origianal ending finishing with Evans fuck you, just made it more powerful for me. |
| 2018-01-09 14:15:47 |
Potential Part 23
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well written all your hard work and patience are paying off now if you had of rushed to the story points there would be no pay off and even soo the journey is just as enjoyable. |
| 2018-05-11 12:36:57 |
Potential Part 24
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I loved it all up till when Rebecca went behind Deanna's back, I guess we are seeing more of the wild cat soo to speak. |
| 2018-05-11 12:37:03 |
Potential Part 24
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I loved it all up till when Rebecca went behind Deanna's back, I guess we are seeing more of the wild cat soo to speak. |