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Comments from Victor Sislick
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2016-10-07 16:03:31 | Carols nephew comes to stay | Story is not so bad but it's almost unreadable with the real bad grammar and twisted sentences. The wrong reported speech is horrible, hard to understand and totally killing any excitement. Like: However she told him. “To keep fucking her.” instead of: However she told him: "Keep fucking me" She now. "Begged him to go deeper." instead of: She begged him "go deeper". And so on. Sorry. But I think You should get an editor. |
| 2016-10-07 16:12:16 | Pam a Horny Mother | Same as the other stories, horrible grammar and very unpleasant to read. It's just a cheap fuck story, not erotic or sexy. Wasted time. You should take the time and get an editor for Your 'stories' so they get real stories instead of mass posting a lot badly readable sentences. Sorry |
| 2020-08-04 19:55:19 | My Quest for 72 Hoors (Angles) - 1 | Sorry, but these Stories are boring to death. The oh so great guy sticks his dick into any pussy he can find and jerks off there, thinking he did a ‚good‘ job, totally neglecting the pleasure of the women he fucks. Nothing erotic here, only puberty fantasies of someone who thinks porn is real. |
| 2020-09-05 14:53:28 | DESI CHEATING INDIAN WIFE | What has all this to do with incest? In-Laws are not blood related so sex between them is defiitely not incest, only cheating. This story would belong in the 'Cheating' category, not here. Btw.: very realistic how the super-religious woman runs around without bra and breasts hanging out of the saree and turns into a sex monster when she sees the superheroes big dick. Haha, pubertarian dreams. |